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So, Chapter One is Almost ready!

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Chapter One - SunstrikeAs I finish chapter… 42 or something, feedback keeps coming in on Chapter One and I think it’s getting close!

Chapter One

I’ve had some issues with point of view shifting, excessive adverbs and a bunch of prepositional phrases.

The amount of description is getting under control as well now as I remove things that are completely irrelevant to the story.

What I’m trying to say is, even after writing, revising, editing, etc., I have a lot to learn but good news for you, my potential future reader, I’m putting in the time and effort to make this a well written and readable story.

You’re welcome!

 

 

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